tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4253905016692346326.comments2013-08-02T17:58:53.225-07:00Vile by Name, Vile by Nature.benvylehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00316896614563676303noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4253905016692346326.post-81334893246522249632013-08-02T17:58:53.225-07:002013-08-02T17:58:53.225-07:00Can't thank you enough for these reflections. ...Can't thank you enough for these reflections. I am exactly where you are. Yours, in catharsis - KAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16151488638252576945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4253905016692346326.post-78740486165934438362012-09-26T19:11:40.466-07:002012-09-26T19:11:40.466-07:00This is beautiful. Your writing is so vivid.This is beautiful. Your writing is so vivid.Levihttp://hincspesaffulget.tumblr.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4253905016692346326.post-71590224958898828022012-08-14T17:03:06.619-07:002012-08-14T17:03:06.619-07:00The contrast between the 2nd and 3rd stanza and th...The contrast between the 2nd and 3rd stanza and the 4th and 5th; elegance versus violence, is really remarkable. Never stop writing, although i'm sure you won't. Closet Doorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18080650938599898164noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4253905016692346326.post-72890428359623326982012-08-01T01:29:06.616-07:002012-08-01T01:29:06.616-07:00Ben,
In my opinion, this was EXTREMELY well-writt...Ben,<br /><br />In my opinion, this was EXTREMELY well-written, and I look forward to reading more from you. Your use of metaphorical imagery gives this poem life.<br /><br />-Kameron TylerAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4253905016692346326.post-9581731814314109122012-07-30T00:40:06.237-07:002012-07-30T00:40:06.237-07:00I also like the assumption you make that I don'...I also like the assumption you make that I don't read my poetry aloud to myself or even check it over! Very interesting. <br /><br />BenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4253905016692346326.post-24242997371566742512012-07-30T00:38:13.644-07:002012-07-30T00:38:13.644-07:00This would be a far more constructive comment if y...This would be a far more constructive comment if you'd cite the ideas you're talking about. It's all well and good for your ego to criticise my knowledge of OED definitions- but it's not helpful if you don't actually SHOW me which ones you think wrong (because I can't see any errors in that respect)<br /><br />Thanks for your comment<br /><br /><br />BenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4253905016692346326.post-1699224573305989602012-07-29T20:56:39.705-07:002012-07-29T20:56:39.705-07:00seems a little wordy to me. try paring down some o...seems a little wordy to me. try paring down some of what you use, and brush up on the OED definitions of them... there're some minute differences between word definitions. I think if you read your poems aloud to yourself a couple of times you'd see where they get clunky.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4253905016692346326.post-13673897174347845502012-02-20T13:21:41.700-08:002012-02-20T13:21:41.700-08:00Wow. I love your writing. and completely relate to...Wow. I love your writing. and completely relate to what you wrote. :(CaesarLiveNLoudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14150275274979465931noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4253905016692346326.post-83897846684415735742012-01-04T19:12:24.605-08:002012-01-04T19:12:24.605-08:00You're so sweet:') Who wouldn't want y...You're so sweet:') Who wouldn't want you? <br />And the story- awfully relatable. It brings back memories for sure.Darian Razdarhttp://mewaffleo.tumblr.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4253905016692346326.post-19605931258985248092011-12-07T00:14:27.984-08:002011-12-07T00:14:27.984-08:00this is fantastic. you have a great use of languag...this is fantastic. you have a great use of language and asides, and parenthesis are my favorite to use in poetry. make more, make more!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4253905016692346326.post-38919093776694572762011-12-07T00:12:28.477-08:002011-12-07T00:12:28.477-08:00this one is my favorite. "he, a titan--"...this one is my favorite. "he, a titan--"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4253905016692346326.post-72921515217660606212011-11-25T21:07:29.982-08:002011-11-25T21:07:29.982-08:00these are all really great! ...in a depressing sor...these are all really great! ...in a depressing sort of way...Austinhttp://twitter.com/F__kinPerfectnoreply@blogger.com